The letter can be found not far from the 2 fishermen at the top of Sacrament. It’s not “croise” but “croire”.
There’s also a daily challenge that doesn’t get translated
The key name is not translated here
For all sacrament guards, replace “Guard” to “Garde”
I think this dialogue needs to be reviewed. I’m not sure I fully understood the meaning of the first sentences, but I’m almost certain it’s not correct. Here, the Watcher says “It was the question”, so “C’était la question” would sound better in French.
You need to change “Challenges” to “Défis” and “Supply Run” to “Course de ravitaillement”
I’ll let you know if I find any more mistakes, keep up the good work, it’s really incredible ! 